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Re: [stir] [sipcore] I-D Action: draft-ietf-sipcore-callinfo-rcd-05.txt

Chris Wendt <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net> Thu, 01 June 2023 13:23 UTC

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From: Chris Wendt <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net>
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Date: Thu, 01 Jun 2023 09:22:55 -0400
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Subject: Re: [stir] [sipcore] I-D Action: draft-ietf-sipcore-callinfo-rcd-05.txt
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Hi Dale,

Appreciate the review, i have fixed your nits and will submit a -06.

-Chris

> On May 25, 2023, at 4:17 PM, Dale R. Worley <worley@ariadne.com> wrote:
> 
> There are some nits:
> 
> At the end of the first line of this example should be ",", not ";":
> 
>   Call-Info: <https://example.com/jbond.json>;purpose=jcard;
>     <https://example.com/jbond.png>;purpose=icon;
>     call-reason="For your ears only"
> 
> This table entry is incorrect.  The document doesn't define a parameter
> named "jcard", but rather a value "jcard" of the value "purpose".  So
> the registration should be:
> 
>   11.1.  SIP Call-Info Header Field Purpose Token Request
> 
>   [this RFC] defines the "jcard" as a new value for the "purpose"
>   parameter in the Call-Info header in the "Header Field Parameters and
>   Parameter Values" registry defined by [RFC3968].
> 
>     +--------------+----------------+-------------------+----------------+
>     | Header Field | Parameter Name | Predefined Values | Reference      |
>     +--------------+----------------+-------------------+----------------+
>     | Call-Info    | purpose        | Yes               | add:[this RFC] |
>     +--------------+----------------+-------------------+----------------+
> 
> Dale

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