[storm] Draft iSCSI Consolidated spec w/ Last Call resolutions

Mallikarjun Chadalapaka <cbm@chadalapaka.com> Mon, 10 October 2011 18:39 UTC

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Subject: [storm] Draft iSCSI Consolidated spec w/ Last Call resolutions
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Hi everyone,

 

I have just published a draft copy of the iSCSI Consolidated draft,
addressing almost all feedback from the recently finished Last Call review
comments.  Here are the changes that went into this draft:

 

.         Required in section 4.2.7.1 that iSCSI Target Name must be the
same as iSCSI Initiator Name for SCSI (composite) devices with both roles.

.         Clarified in section 10.2 that ACA is a SHOULD requirement only
for iSCSI targets.

.         Fixed literally a couple of hundred broken cross-references

.         Made a few editorial updates throughout

.         Fixed the incorrect MUST requirement on target authentication, now
back at MAY

 

The document has change bars reflecting the above:
http://www.chadalapaka.com/Documents/draft-ietf-storm-iscsi-cons-04.pdf 

 

The only two updates that I am waiting on at this point:

 

-          Updated text from David Black to keep up with IPSec version
updates

-          Some security-related clarification text from Julian Satran

 

Plus, there are a couple of pending editorial updates (e.g.
acknowledgments).

 

Please take a look at the draft, and let me know ASAP if your Last Call
comment has not been addressed.

 

Thanks!

 

Mallikarjun