[Suit] Manifest-09 comment
Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com> Thu, 23 July 2020 22:37 UTC
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From: Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com>
To: Brendan Moran <Brendan.Moran@arm.com>
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Subject: [Suit] Manifest-09 comment
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Section 8.7.2.2 says: Ø Components are Ø identified by Component Identifiers, i.e. arrays of binary strings, Ø but referenced in commands It looks to me like the sentence above got chopped off, as there’s no punctuation at the end and it reads like there should be more words in the sentence. Dave P.S. Also a nit: always put a comma after “i.e.” per Chicago style used by the RFC editor (the RFC editor pass would add it for you anyway)
- [Suit] Manifest-09 comment Dave Thaler
- Re: [Suit] Manifest-09 comment Brendan Moran