Re: [T2TRG] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03.txt

Hi Thorsten

Thanks again for the fixes. We will address these in the next revision. 
We are hoping that the chairs would assign a document shepherd who would 
help us iron out all such issues.

/--Mohit

On 05/29/2017 05:24 PM, Thorsten Dahm wrote:
> Hello,
>
> I don't want to be pedantic but please go over the document one more 
> time and fix the typo and grammar mistakes. I've found a few, nothing 
> that would make a difference but just easier to read.
>
> Some of the things I saw:
>
> smart phone vs. smartphone -> debatable, but I think the spelling 
> without the blank in the middle is more common
> Distribute -> should be Distributed
> software reserve engineered -> should be reverse engineered
> ( summarized in Section 5.1) -> should be (summarized in Section 5.1)
>
> Thanks,
> Thorsten
>
> On 28 May 2017 at 13:32, Mohit Sethi <mohit.m.sethi@ericsson.com 
> <mailto:mohit.m.sethi@ericsson.com>> wrote:
>
>     Hi folks,
>
>     We have updated the security considerations draft based on the
>     extensive feedback we have received on the SAAG and T2TRG mailing
>     lists. The current version of the draft can be found here:
>
>     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03
>     <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03>
>
>     We have now made the document more concise and it focuses on the
>     state-of-the-art and challenges for IoT security. We will work on
>     a separate document that contains the security profiles and
>     mitigation mechanisms based on the feedback from the group. The
>     authors believe that the document is now more or less ready and in
>     good shape. Your feedback and comments are appreciated as always.
>
>     Oscar, Sandeep and Mohit
>
>
>
>     -------- Forwarded Message --------
>     Subject: 	[T2TRG] I-D Action: draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03.txt
>     Date: 	Wed, 24 May 2017 01:49:29 -0700
>     From: 	internet-drafts@ietf.org <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>
>     To: 	i-d-announce@ietf.org <mailto:i-d-announce@ietf.org>
>     CC: 	t2trg@irtf.org <mailto:t2trg@irtf.org>
>
>
>
>     A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>     This draft is a work item of the Thing-to-Thing of the IETF.
>
>              Title           : State of the Art and Challenges for the Internet of Things
>              Authors         : Oscar Garcia-Morchon
>                                Sandeep S. Kumar
>                                Mohit Sethi
>     	Filename        : draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03.txt
>     	Pages           : 46
>     	Date            : 2017-05-24
>
>     Abstract:
>         The Internet of Things (IoT) concept refers to the usage of standard
>         Internet protocols to allow for human-to-thing and thing-to-thing
>         communication.  The security needs are well-recognized and and many
>         standardization steps for providing security have been taken, for
>         example, the specification of Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP)
>         over Datagram Transport Layer Security (DTLS).  However, security
>         challenges still exist and there are some use cases that lack a
>         suitable solution.  In this document, we first discuss the various
>         stages in the lifecycle of a thing.  We then look at the security
>         building blocks available for securing the different layers of the
>         Internet protocol suite.  Next, we document the various security
>         threats to a thing and the challenges that one might face in order to
>         protect against these threats.  Lastly, we discuss the next steps
>         needed to ensure roll out of secure Internet of Things services.
>
>         This document is a product of the IRTF Thing-to-Thing Research Group
>         (T2TRG).
>
>
>     The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons/
>     <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons/>
>
>     There are also htmlized versions available at:
>     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03
>     <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03>
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03
>     <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03>
>
>     A diff from the previous version is available at:
>     https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03
>     <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-t2trg-iot-seccons-03>
>
>
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