[Taps] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-taps-interface-24: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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DISCUSS:
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Thanks for the revised text in v-22, -23 and -24.  I’m still do not
understanding what exact Security Parameters that Section 6.3.1 is normatively
specifying (and which of them are examples).  My confusion is that Section 6.2
has a crisp list of parameters with an explicit names, type, and default value.
 The equivalent is not present for the security related parameters.

Section 6.3 says “except as noted below, as with the rest of the Transport
Services API, exact names of parameters and/or values of enumerations (e.g.,
ciphersuites) used in the security parameters are system and implementation
specific, and ought to be chosen to follow the principle of least surprise for
users of the platform / language environment in question.”  How does one read
“except when noted below”?  Is this section saying the normative parameters are
server-certificate, client-certificate, pinned-server-certificate, alpn,
supported-group, ciphersuite, signature-algorithm, max-cached-sessions,
cached-session-lifetime-seconds, pre-shared-key OR that “an API should define
certificate bundles, certificate chains for pinned certificates, ALPN, session
cache management parameters, supported groups/ciphersuite/ parameters, and PSK
parameters but no further details are provided here beyond naming these
categories of parameters”?

I observe that the guidance in Section 4.1 suggests that parameter names are in
CamelCase.  That isn’t used here (e.g., “server-certificate” should be
“ServerCertificate”).  This might hint that there are not parameters here. 
However, the bulleted list in Section 6.3.1. is prefaced with “Security
configuration parameters and sample usage follow:” seems to suggest that these
are concrete parameters.


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COMMENT:
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Thank you to Sean Turner for the SECDIR review.