[Taps] AD review : draft-ietf-taps-arch-15
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From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Taps] AD review : draft-ietf-taps-arch-15
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Hello WG, I have now done my review of the architecture document. Thanks for producing a very good document. I haven’t identified very critical issues, however, I would like see the following issues addressed or discussed before we move the document forward - -https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1081 https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1082 -https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1083 -https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1084 -https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1085 -https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1086 -https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1087 -https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1088 -https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1080 - https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1090 I have some minor comments/suggestions that i have put into a single issue which can be addressed as a part of IETF Last Call - https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts/issues/1091 //Zahed
- [Taps] AD review : draft-ietf-taps-arch-15 Zaheduzzaman Sarker