Re: [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-08.txt

Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Wed, 31 August 2022 16:23 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-08.txt
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This version of the draft addresses comments raised during IESG review. Separate e-mail responses will be sent out on the individual threads where some of these comments were made.

Thanks.

> On Aug 31, 2022, at 9:14 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the TCP Maintenance and Minor Extensions WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : A YANG Model for Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) Configuration and State
>        Authors         : Michael Scharf
>                          Mahesh Jethanandani
>                          Vishal Murgai
>  Filename        : draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-08.txt
>  Pages           : 29
>  Date            : 2022-08-31
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document specifies a minimal YANG model for TCP on devices that
>   are configured and managed by network management protocols.  The YANG
>   model defines a container for all TCP connections, and groupings of
>   authentication parameters that can be imported and used in TCP
>   implementations or by other models that need to configure TCP
>   parameters.  The model also includes basic TCP statistics.  The model
>   is compliant with Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA)
>   (RFC 8342).
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp/
> 
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-08
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-08
> 
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
> 
> 


Mahesh Jethanandani
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