Re: [tcpm] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-lebovitz-ietf-tcpm-tcp-ao-crypto-01

Joe Touch <touch@ISI.EDU> Sun, 12 July 2009 15:36 UTC

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Gregory,

The document needs to be updated to align with AO-05 as follows:

	- remove the reference to the TAPD; use Master Key Tuple (MKT)
	instead

	- check spelling (TPC vs TCP)

	- AO uses the term data_block, not conn_block, for KDF input
	(conn_block could refer to the TCB from RFC 793,
	so I avoided that term)

	- the output of the PRF should be called the traffic key,
	not the connection key; similarly for the input to the MAC alg
		if a shorter term is needed in this doc, it
		needs to be defined in this doc (e.g., traff_key),
		because TCP-AO-05 doesn't define any notation
		other than "traffic key"

	- check formatting, esp. the line starting "where FR is always"

	- the tips for UI are useful, but 'tips' aren't a specification,
	so SHOULDs need to be removed

Joe


Gregory M. Lebovitz wrote:
> Folks,
> I just submitted the update for this document. Please have a quick
> review and provide feedback to me, cc'ing the tcpm@ietf.org list.
> 
> Wes and David B - the draft is posted, so you can link it in the WG
> agenda now.
> 
> Hope it helps,
> Gregory.
> 
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>> Subject: New Version Notification for
>>          draft-lebovitz-ietf-tcpm-tcp-ao-crypto-01
>> Date: Sat, 11 Jul 2009 23:48:20 -0700 (PDT)
>>
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-lebovitz-ietf-tcpm-tcp-ao-crypto-01.txt
>> has been successfuly submitted by Gregory Lebovitz and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Filename:       draft-lebovitz-ietf-tcpm-tcp-ao-crypto
>> Revision:       01
>> Title:          Cryptographic Algorithms, Use, & Implementation
>> Requirments for TCP Authentication Option
>> Creation_date:  2009-07-11
>> WG ID:          Independent Submission
>> Number_of_pages: 16
>>
>> Abstract:
>> The TCP Authentication Option, TCP-AO, relies on security algorithms
>> to provide authentication between two end-points.  There are many
>> such algorithms available, and two TCP-AO systems cannot interoperate
>> unless they are using the same algorithm(s).  This document specifies
>> the algorithms and attributes that can be used in TCP-AO's current
>> manual keying mechanism.
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> The IETF Secretariat.
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[tcpm] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-le… Gregory M. Lebovitz
Re: [tcpm] Fwd: New Version Notification for draf… Joe Touch