Re: [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-06.txt

Yuchung Cheng <ycheng@google.com> Thu, 07 November 2019 19:32 UTC

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From: Yuchung Cheng <ycheng@google.com>
Date: Thu, 07 Nov 2019 11:31:56 -0800
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Subject: Re: [tcpm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-06.txt
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Thank you Bob. We'll queue these fix for next rev.

On Sun, Nov 3, 2019 at 12:44 PM Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> wrote:
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> Yuchung,
>
> Thx for this.
>
> All the deltas make sense (to me).
>
> FWIW, a couple of nits in the deltas:
>
> s/wether/whether/
>
> s/The [Sprout] congestion control also independently designed/
>   /The [Sprout] congestion control was also independently designed/
>
> Cheers
>
>
>
> Bob
>
> On 01/11/2019 23:55, Yuchung Cheng wrote:
> > On Fri, Nov 1, 2019 at 4:40 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
> >>
> >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> >> This draft is a work item of the TCP Maintenance and Minor Extensions WG of the IETF.
> >>
> >>          Title           : RACK: a time-based fast loss detection algorithm for TCP
> >>          Authors         : Yuchung Cheng
> >>                            Neal Cardwell
> >>                            Nandita Dukkipati
> >>                            Priyaranjan Jha
> >>          Filename        : draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-06.txt
> > This revision primarily addresses the questions raised this year e.g.
> > RACK.RTT definition by Martin Duke, TLP RTO re-arming by Yi Huang, and
> > a new reference on Sprout's similar reo_wnd design by Keith Winstein.
> > Thank you for the reviews.
> >
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