Re: [Teas] WG adoption poll for draft-busizheng-teas-yang-te-mpls-topology-06

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Subject: Re: [Teas] WG adoption poll for draft-busizheng-teas-yang-te-mpls-topology-06
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Hi All, 

I support this draft for WG adoption. It fills an important gap by providing YANG for MPLS-TE and MPLS-TP, topologies. 

We also reference this draft in other work (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-poi-applicability/), so it would be useful if this document were adopted. 

A few quick comments for the authors, nothing that should stop the draft from being adopted but might be fixed/clarified in a new substantive version: 

- Scanning the YANG model, it is obvious how the proposed extensions support single-domain environments. It’s less obvious how someone might use this across domains; some coordination would likely be required. 
- Several acronyms should be expanded for first use, such as: “ECMP”, “OTN”,  “LSP”, et al. 
- Several spelling/grammer NITS, including: “bidirectional”, “need are”.
- You cite “I-D.ietf-teas-yang-l3-te-topo” as a normative reference, but “I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te-mpls” as informative? Both models are augmented by draft-busizheng-teas-yang-te-mpls-topology. 

BR, Dan. 

On Fri, Jan 26, 2024 at 6:13 AM Oscar González de Dios <mailto:oscar.gonzalezdedios@telefonica.com> wrote:
Dear TEAS WG colleagues,
 
This email begins a 2-week adoption poll for “A YANG Data Model for MPLS-TE Topology”:
 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-busizheng-teas-yang-te-mpls-topology/
 
There is no IPR disclosed for this document. All authors and contributors have replied to the IPR poll.
 
Please voice your support or objections to adoption on the list by the end of February  9th (any time zone).
 
Thank you,
 
  Oscar (as Co-chair)
 

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