Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-08.txt

Lou,

I’ve read the updated draft, and it’s a good overall cleanup of the text to
make the concepts easier to understand. My only major comment is that
section 4 could become another subsection of section 3, but that’s minor.

Cheers,
Andy

On Fri, Oct 6, 2017 at 3:17 PM, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> wrote:

> Daniele, Authors,
>
>     Thank you for this substantive update.
>
> All,
>
> There has been a reasonable pass at cleaning up much of the text - and a
> fair bit has changed, so please review and comment -- even if it's just
> to say that you've read it and thing the changes are beneficial.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Lou (and Pavan)
>
> On 10/4/2017 11:29 AM, Daniele Ceccarelli wrote:
> > Dear WG,
> >
> > we submitted a new version of the ACTN framework draft which does not
> introduce or modify any concept but that is the result of a heavy text
> re-adjustment (thanks a lot Adrian for the huge effort) to improve
> readability and get rid of duplicated and redundant text.
> >
> > The authors and contributors think this is ready for WG LC and would
> appreciate your comments to the list.
> >
> > BR
> > Daniele (for the co-authors)
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Teas [mailto:teas-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-
> >> drafts@ietf.org
> >> Sent: mercoledì 4 ottobre 2017 17:15
> >> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> >> Cc: teas@ietf.org
> >> Subject: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-08.txt
> >>
> >>
> >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> >> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and
> Signaling
> >> WG of the IETF.
> >>
> >>         Title           : Framework for Abstraction and Control of
> Traffic Engineered
> >> Networks
> >>         Authors         : Daniele Ceccarelli
> >>                           Young Lee
> >>      Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-08.txt
> >>      Pages           : 37
> >>      Date            : 2017-10-04
> >>
> >> Abstract:
> >>    Traffic Engineered networks have a variety of mechanisms to
> >>    facilitate the separation of the data plane and control plane. They
> >>    also have a range of management and provisioning protocols to
> >>    configure and activate network resources.  These mechanisms
> >>    represent key technologies for enabling flexible and dynamic
> >>    networking.
> >>
> >>    Abstraction of network resources is a technique that can be applied
> >>    to a single network domain or across multiple domains to create a
> >>    single virtualized network that is under the control of a network
> >>    operator or the customer of the operator that actually owns
> >>    the network resources.
> >>
> >>    This document provides a framework for Abstraction and Control of
> >>    Traffic Engineered Networks (ACTN).
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework/
> >>
> >> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-08
> >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-08
> >>
> >> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-08
> >>
> >>
> >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> >> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> >>
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