Re: [Teas] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-03.txt

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Dear TEAS, 

Please find an updated version of draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing. 

Updates include:

- Improved readability and some section titles
- Squashing editorial NITs and grammar
- Adding additional references and, where suitable adding specific section references
- Reducing some of the text for succinctness 

Thank you to the authors (especially Med) for their review and thoughts in finalising the document. 

Chairs, the authors now feel the document is ready for a WG Last Call. 

BR, Dan. 

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Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-03.txt


A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-03.txt
has been successfully submitted by Daniel King and posted to the IETF repository.

Name:		draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing
Revision:	03
Title:		Applicability of Abstraction and Control of Traffic Engineered Networks (ACTN) to Network Slicing
Document date:	2023-03-06
Group:		teas
Pages:		23
URL:            https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-03.txt
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing/
Html:           https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-03.html
Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing
Diff:           https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-03

Abstract:
   Network abstraction is a technique that can be applied to a network
   domain to obtain a view of potential connectivity across the network
   by utilizing a set of policies to select network resources.

   Network slicing is an approach to network operations that builds on
   the concept of network abstraction to provide programmability,
   flexibility, and modularity.  It may use techniques such as Software
   Defined Networking (SDN) and Network Function Virtualization (NFV) to
   create multiple logical or virtual networks, each tailored for a set
   of services that share the same set of requirements.

   Abstraction and Control of Traffic Engineered Networks (ACTN) is
   described in RFC 8453.  It defines an SDN-based architecture that
   relies on the concept of network and service abstraction to detach
   network and service control from the underlying data plane.

   This document outlines the applicability of ACTN to network slicing
   in a Traffic Engineered (TE) network that utilizes IETF technologies.
   It also identifies the features of network slicing not currently
   within the scope of ACTN, and indicates where ACTN might be extended.

                                                                                  


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