[Teas] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9522 (7815)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Tue, 20 February 2024 11:51 UTC

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Subject: [Teas] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9522 (7815)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9522,
"Overview and Principles of Internet Traffic Engineering".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7815

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Nikolai Malykh <nmalykh@protokols.ru>

Section: 5.1.3.8

Original Text
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   IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) [RFC5470] defines an architecture
   that is very similar to the RTFM architecture and includes Metering,
   Exporting, and Collecting Processes.  [RFC5472] describes the
   applicability of IPFIX and makes a comparison with RTFM, pointing out
   that, architecturally, while RTM talks about devices, IPFIX deals
   with processes to clarify that multiple of those processes may be co-
   located on the same machine.  The IPFIX protocol [RFC7011] is widely
   implemented.

Corrected Text
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   IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) [RFC5470] defines an architecture
   that is very similar to the RTFM architecture and includes Metering,
   Exporting, and Collecting Processes.  [RFC5472] describes the
   applicability of IPFIX and makes a comparison with RTFM, pointing out
   that, architecturally, while RTFM talks about devices, IPFIX deals
   with processes to clarify that multiple of those processes may be co-
   located on the same machine.  The IPFIX protocol [RFC7011] is widely
   implemented.

Notes
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Missing a letter in the acronym RTFM.

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RFC9522 (draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-27)
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Title               : Overview and Principles of Internet Traffic Engineering
Publication Date    : January 2024
Author(s)           : A. Farrel, Ed.
Category            : INFORMATIONAL
Source              : Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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