[Teas] FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-09.txt

["Wubo (lana)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Med, all,

Thank you again for another detailed review. 
We've created issues #61-74 on GitHub to track your in-depth reviews of version 08.
https://github.com/lana-wu/ietf-ns-nbi/issues

After discussion, the authors have made the following changes in rev-09:
1. #61: Align with the IETF network slicing framework RFC XXXX network slicing. 
Fixed
2. # 62, # 64: PE and CE information exposure:  
Added the following text:
For customer accessing the PE node information, the customer management system can obtain the topology information exposed by the NCE before the service request, such as the SAP topology or abstract TE topology.
3. #63: SDP QoS policy: 
Added rate-limit per cos as you suggested.
4. #65: SDP MTU definition:  
Replaced "MUST" with behavior as your suggestion.
5. #66: Added NS monitoring examples in the appendix.
6. #67: NSS precompute
We add new admin state "admin-compute-only" and NETCONF "test-only" actions.
7. #68: Definition of "service-tag-opaque"
Clarify that opaque value can be used for administrative purposes such as filtering.
8. #69: For "service-slos"
We recommend keeping "metric-unit" as a string. In this way, customers can flexibly select time units ( e.g. second, milliseconds, microseconds), bandwidth units (),or loss unit (percent, ). We will discuss this definition in a separate topic.
9. #70: "ac-tag" 
We add the tag identifiers of the CVLAN and SVLAN on the basis of the VLAN.
10. #71: Add NSC scope to SDP "node-id"
11. #72: YANG leafref typedef 
We add a typedef for reusing SLO-SLE template. We think that SDP leafref is related to the definition of the context node and is not applicable to typedef.
# 73 Appendix C. the Complete Model Tree:
We recommend keeping the complete tree for reference.

Please see the Diff:     https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-09.

Thanks,
Bo Wu

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Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-09.txt

A new version of Internet-Draft
draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-09.txt has been successfully submitted by Bo Wu and posted to the IETF repository.

Name:     draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang
Revision: 09
Title:    A YANG Data Model for the RFC AAAA Network Slice Service
Date:     2024-02-17
Group:    teas
Pages:    120
URL:      https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-09.txt
Status:   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang/
HTMLized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang
Diff:     https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-09

Abstract:

   This document defines a YANG data model for RFC AAAA Network Slice
   Service.  The model can be used in the Network Slice Service
   interface between a customer and a provider that offers RFC AAAA
   Network Slice Services.



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