Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10.txt

["Wubo (lana)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Med,

Many thanks for your helpful review. We will fix them all in the next revision.

Regards,
Bo

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Hi Bo, all, 

Please fix the following in the next iteration of the draft: 

* Figure 21: s/"match-type": "ietf-nss:service-any-match"/"match-type": "ietf-nss:any-match" (many occurrences)
* Idem for Figure 22
* Figure 23: missing CRLF right after content-type
* Figure 25: add the module prefix at the top level
* Figure 27: s/service-any-match/any-match (many occurrences)
* Figure 27: s/tag-service/service-tag-service
* Figure 29: s/service-any-match/any-match (many occurrences
             s/service-dscp-match/dscp-match (many occurrences)
* Figure 31: s/service-vlan-match/vlan-match (many occurrences)
* Figure 33: s/service-any-match/any-match (many occurrences)
* Figure 35: s/service-any-match/any-match (many occurrences)

Thank you.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : I-D-Announce <[e-mail]> De la part de 
> [e-mail] Envoyé : dimanche 17 mars 2024 06:04 À : 
> [e-mail] Cc : [e-mail] Objet : I-D Action: 
> draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10.txt
> 
> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10.txt is 
> now available. It is a work item of the Traffic Engineering 
> Architecture and Signaling (TEAS) WG of the IETF.
> 
>    Title:   A YANG Data Model for the RFC 9543 Network Slice Service
>    Authors: Bo Wu
>             Dhruv Dhody
>             Reza Rokui
>             Tarek Saad
>             John Mullooly
>    Name:    draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-nbi-yang-10.txt
>    Pages:   121
>    Dates:   2024-03-16
> 
> Abstract:
> 
>    This document defines a YANG data model for RFC 9543 Network Slice
>    Service.  The model can be used in the Network Slice Service
>    interface between a customer and a provider that offers RFC 9543
>    Network Slice Services.
> 

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