Re: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Mon, 04 September 2017 21:01 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
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Hi, Adrian. OK, it's a fair cop. Cheers,Elwyn Sent from Samsung tablet. -------- Original message --------From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Date: 04/09/2017 17:59 (GMT+00:00) To: 'Elwyn Davies' <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>, gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control.all@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org, teas@ietf.org Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 Hi Elwyn, -04 has Some of this will be the TED as is normal for a PCE and can be collected using the mechanisms already in place (such as listening to the IGPs, using BGP-LS [RFC7752], or northbound export of YANG- encoded data [I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te-topo]).-05 has Some of this will be the TED as is normal for a PCE and can be collected using the mechanisms already in place (such as listening to the IGPs, using BGP-LS [RFC7752], or northbound export of YANG- encoded data [I-D.ietf-teas-yang-te-topo] from the network elements to the controller). I think that probably gives enough context. Yes, thanks for the typo in 2.1.2. I'll save it for Auth48. A From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:elwynd@dial.pipex.com] Sent: 04 September 2017 14:46 To: adrian@olddog.co.uk; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; teas@ietf.org Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 Hi, Adrian. Two points:- I don't see an explanation of northbound in -05.- In the new text at the end of s2.1.2 s/whole the controllers/while the controllers/ Otherwise, the extra text and changes look helpful. Best wshes,Elwyn Sent from Samsung tablet. -------- Original message --------From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Date: 04/09/2017 10:47 (GMT+00:00) To: 'Elwyn Davies' <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>, gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control.all@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org, teas@ietf.org Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 Thanks Elwyn, Clarified in the next revision. Adrian > -----Original Message----- > From: Teas [mailto:teas-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Elwyn Davies > Sent: 28 August 2017 20:24 > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control.all@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; teas@ietf.org > Subject: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 > > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 2017-08-28 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-24 > IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31 > > Summary: Thanks for addressing my Last Call comments on -03. The new version > is ready with one introduced nit. Also I am still of the abstract is somewhat > overlong. > > Nit: > s6, para 2: The SDN term 'northbound' has appeared in the new version. Needs > brief explanation. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > _______________________________________________ > Teas mailing list > Teas@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/teas
- [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-… Elwyn Davies
- Re: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-t… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-t… Elwyn Davies
- Re: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-t… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [Teas] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-t… Elwyn Davies