[Teas] draft-liu-teas-yang-te-topo-01

Hariharan Ananthakrishnan <hari@packetdesign.com> Thu, 26 March 2015 19:39 UTC

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Subject: [Teas] draft-liu-teas-yang-te-topo-01
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Hi Authors,

Couple of comments:

[1] “import ted”: It would be good to provide reference from where ‘ted’ module is being picked up from (draft-clemm-i2rs-yang-l3-topo ?)
[2] Importing ‘ted’ in te-topo module will make this module ’not’ generic, since ted has ipv4/ipv6 references. Similar issues with usage of inet:ipv4-addres and inet:ipv6-address.
[3] I am not sure having 'is-abstract' in node and link helps as te-topology itself is suppose to be generic (or abstract). If there is really a use-case then we should move this to “generic network-topology” (draft-clemm-i2rs-yang-network-topo), assuming this topology is going to be derived from draft-clemm-i2rs-yang-network-topo.

Thanks,
- Hari