Re: [Teas] Last Call: <draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-15.txt> (YANG Data Model for Traffic Engineering (TE) Topologies) to Proposed Standard

["tom p." <[e-mail]>]

Lou et al

I note that the YANG module in this I-D has Reference statements to 20
other RFC, which is good, but only one of the twenty appear in the
References for the I-D, which I think is not good, and needs to be
fixed.

Also, some of the RFC which appear in Reference clauses of the YANG
module appear in [square brackets] e.g. [RFC6001] which I think should
not be there.

In the same vein, there are imports of four other YANG modules but no
indication as to which RFC they can be found in - again, I think that
that needs fixing with a Reference statement.

A quick pass suggests the missing references are to
1195 missing
3209 missing
3272 missing
3471 missing
3630 missing
3785 missing
4201 4202 4203 4206 all missing
4872 missing
5152 missing
5212 missing
5305 missing
6001 missing
6241 ok Norm
7471 missing
7752 missing
7579 missing

Russ's comment about Section 1.1 does not seem to have been addressed.

Tom Petch


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> The IESG has received a request from the Traffic Engineering
Architecture and
> Signaling WG (teas) to consider the following document: - 'YANG Data
Model
> for Traffic Engineering (TE) Topologies'
>   <draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-15.txt> as Proposed Standard
>
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
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> Abstract
>
>
>    This document defines a YANG data model for representing,
retrieving
>    and manipulating Traffic Engineering (TE) Topologies. The model
>    serves as a base model that other technology specific TE Topology
>    models can augment.
>
>
>
>
>
> The file can be obtained via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo/
>
> IESG discussion can be tracked via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo/ballot/
>
>
> No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.
>
>
> The document contains these normative downward references.
> See RFC 3967 for additional information:
>     rfc5212: Requirements for GMPLS-Based Multi-Region and Multi-Layer
Networks (MRN/MLN) (Informational - IETF stream)
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>
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