Re: [Teas] Disposition of draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-00

Hi John, all, 

Thank you for initiating this.

I do see a value in merging the definition draft into the framework. This will at least avoid some inconsistencies I raised in the past between the two.

I know that the authors of the definition I-D kindly organized off-list discussions to explore many aspects of the definition I-D. It would be fair to let them share/inject the conclusions of these discussions into the merged document. Thanks.   

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Teas [mailto:teas-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de John E Drake
> Envoyé : mercredi 31 mars 2021 17:44
> À : teas@ietf.org
> Objet : [Teas] Disposition of draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-
> definition-00
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Eric and I have been asked by the teas working group chairs to merge
> the subject draft into the framework
> draft: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-
> network-slice-framework-00.  Our proposal is detailed below.
> 
> 
> Definition of IETF Network Slices
>             draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-01
> 
> Table of Contents
> 
>    1.  Introduction  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 2
> 
> *****JD  The content of the two introductions will be merged
> 
>    2.  Terms and Abbreviations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 3
> 
> *****JD  This will be a new section 2 in the Framework draft.    The
> current
> section 2 of the Framework draft will be split between the new
> section 2 and possibly sections 3 and 4.
> 
>    3.  Definition and Scope of IETF Network Slice  . . . . . . . . .
> 4
> 
> *****JD  This section will be moved to the new section 2.
> 
>    4.  IETF Network Slice System Characteristics . . . . . . . . . .
> 4
> 
> *****JD  This section will be moved to the new section 2
> 
>      4.1.  Objectives for IETF Network Slices  . . . . . . . . . . .
> 5
> 
> *****JD  This section will be split  between the new section 2 and
> possibly sections 3 and 4.
> 
>        4.1.1.  Service Level Objectives  . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 5
>        4.1.2.  Minimal Set of SLOs . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 5
>        4.1.3.  Other Objectives  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 7
> 
> *****JD  These sections will be moved to the new section 2.
> 
>      4.2.  IETF Network Slice Endpoints  . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 7
> 
> *****JD  This section will be moved to the new section 2 and will be
> updated to use the terminology agreed upon on the mailing list.  A
> reference to RFC 4364's section 9 "Carriers' Carriers"
> (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc4364#section-9)
> will be added.  We will also note that the 'CE', 'attachment
> circuit', and 'PE' can all be virtualized.
> 
>        4.2.1.  IETF Network Slice Connectivity Types . . . . . . . .
> 9
> 
> *****JD  This section will be moved to the new section 2.
> 
>      4.3.  IETF Network Slice Composition  . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 9
> 
> *****JD  This section will be moved to the new section 2.  Note that
> the non-definitional material in *all* of the preceding sections will
> be split between sections 3 and 4.  Section
> 4 will become a generalized 'Applicability' section .
> 
>    5.  IETF Network Slice Structure  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 10
> 
> *****JD  This section will be split  between the new section 2 and
> possibly sections 3 and 4.
> 
>    6.  IETF Network Slice Stakeholders . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 11
> 
> *****JD  This section will be moved to section 4.
> 
>    7.  IETF Network Slice Controller Interfaces  . . . . . . . . . .
> 12
> 
> *****JD  This is covered in section 3.3.
> 
>    8.  Realizing IETF Network Slice  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 12
> 
> *****JD  This is covered in section 3.5.
> 
>    9.  Isolation in IETF Network Slices  . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 13
>      9.1.  Isolation as a Service Requirement  . . . . . . . . . . .
> 13
>      9.2.  Isolation in IETF Network Slice Realization . . . . . . .
> 13
> 
> *****JD  These sections will be moved to the new section 2.  They
> assume a definition of the term 'isolation' which has never been
> explicitly rendered, so we will propose a definition to the mailing
> list.
> 
>    10. Security Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 14
> 
> *****JD  Relevant material will be moved to section 5.2.  We will
> propose what we consider to be relevant and irrelevant material to
> the mailing list.
> 
>    11. IANA Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 14
> 
> *****JD  The Framework draft already has this section.
> 
>    12. Acknowledgment  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 15
> 
> *****JD  This section will be moved to section 6.
> 
>    13. Informative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 15
> 
> *****JD  This section will be moved to section 7.
> 
>    Authors' Addresses  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 17
> 
> *****JD  This will need to be sorted out with the authors and
> contributors to the Framework draft.
> 
> 
> 
> *****JD  For reference, below is the current table of contents for
> the Framework draft:
> 
> Framework for IETF Network Slices
>             draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-framework-00
> 
> Table of Contents
> 
>    1.  Introduction  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 2
>    2.  IETF Network Slice Objectives . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 4
>    3.  Framework . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 5
>      3.1.  Management systems or other applications  . . . . . . . .
> 6
>      3.2.  Expressing connectivity intents . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 6
>      3.3.  IETF Network Slice Controller (NSC) . . . . . . . . . . .
> 8
>        3.3.1.  Northbound Interface (NBI)  . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 9
>      3.4.  Mapping . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 9
>      3.5.  Underlying technology . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 9
>    4.  Applicability of ACTN to IETF Network Slices  . . . . . . . .
> 10
>    5.  Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 12
>      5.1.  Monitoring  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 12
>      5.2.  Security Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 13
>      5.3.  Privacy Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 13
>      5.4.  IANA Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 13
>    6.  Acknowledgments . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 13
>    7.  References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 14
>      7.1.  Normative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 14
>      7.2.  Informative References  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 14
>    Contributors  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 17
>    Authors' Addresses  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
> 18
> 
> Yours Irrespectively,
> 
> John
> 
> 
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