Re: [Teep] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-teep-architecture

Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com> Tue, 07 January 2020 03:14 UTC

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From: Dave Thaler <dthaler@microsoft.com>
To: "Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy" <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com>, "teep@ietf.org" <teep@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Teep] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-teep-architecture
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I opened one pull request for editorial issues (https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/pull/109),
and filed seven other issues listed at https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues

110) Service Provider discussion is confusing<https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues/110>
111) Terminology section is not consistently ordered<https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues/111>
112) Text about carriers is confusing<https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues/112>
113) Section 6.2.3 contradicts section 4.2<https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues/113>
114) Figure 3 is too hard to understand<https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues/114>
115) Reference to IANA number<https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues/115>
116) Incorrect/obsolete statements about TEEP Broker<https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues/116>

I have ideas about how to address all of them, but if others have comments, please speak up.

The possibly(?) contentious one might be that in #110 I am proposing to use the term
"App Developer" throughout, instead of using "Service Provider" in some places and "App Developer" in others
and then saying they're synonymous like it does now.   (I'd be ok with mentioning that in some contexts an App Developer
might be known as a "Service Provider" if that is important to GlobalPlatform folks.)

Dave

From: TEEP <teep-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy
Sent: Monday, December 23, 2019 4:17 AM
To: teep@ietf.org
Subject: [Teep] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-teep-architecture

Hi all,

This message starts a Work Group Last Call (WGLC) for TEEP architecture.  The version to be reviewed is https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teep-architecture-05<https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-teep-architecture-05&data=02%7C01%7Cdthaler%40microsoft.com%7C88bfc467b880468e461e08d787a2196d%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C637127002642640827&sdata=aallqAzJH3MqV2bbzMzwvD3OXhpRFyPJVHeaWye4x40%3D&reserved=0>

The WGLC will last for 4 weeks and will end on 20 January 2020.

Please send your comments to the list before this date and your assessment of whether or not it is ready to proceed to publication.

Regards,
Tiru & Nancy