[Teep] PRs for draft-ietf-teep-architecture-05

Hannes Tschofenig <Hannes.Tschofenig@arm.com> Sun, 08 December 2019 10:38 UTC

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From: Hannes Tschofenig <Hannes.Tschofenig@arm.com>
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Subject: [Teep] PRs for draft-ietf-teep-architecture-05
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I prepared -05 based on a review. I created 16 PRs to address my review comments and provided text proposals. Those PRs can easily be incorporated into the document, see https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/pulls

Two issues, https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues/107 and https://github.com/ietf-teep/architecture/issues/108, are relatively minor but I didn't know what text I should provide.

IMHO the architecture document is in very good shape already.

Ciao
Hannes



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