[Teep] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-teep-otrp-over-http-14: (with COMMENT)

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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-teep-otrp-over-http-14: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you to Stefan Santesson for the SECDIR review.

** Section 5.  Starting in this section there is the introduction of the
concept of “message buffers” being exchanged.   Is there some more formal
description of that idea in this context.  I didn’t find that term defined in
draft-ietf-teep-protocol or draft-ietf-teep-architecture.

** Section 8.  The protocol interaction model has URI being exchanged and
followed.  Consider providing a reference to Section 7 of RFC 3986 to provide
generic guidance about de-referencing URIs.