Re: [TICTOC] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10: (with COMMENT)

[Jiangyuanlong <[e-mail]>]

Hi Eric,

Thanks for your review and comments, please see my replies prefixed with [YJ].

Regards,
Yuanlong

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> From: Eric Rescorla [mailto:[e-mail]]
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> Subject: Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10:
> (with COMMENT)
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> Eric Rescorla has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> Rich version of this review at:
> https://mozphab-ietf.devsvcdev.mozaws.net/D3264
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> 
> I concur with Ben Campbell's DISCUSS.
> 
> COMMENTS
> S 1.
> >      2008.
> >
> >      o  When the IEEE 1588 standard is revised (e.g. the IEEE 1588
> >      revision in progress at the time of writing this document), it will
> >      add some new optional features to its data sets.  The YANG module
> >      of this document MAY be revised and extended to support these new
> 
> Nit: this looks like it's more a statement of fact than normative
> langauge.
> 
[YJ] For consistency, "MAY" in this bullet will change to "may", and "can" in bullet 4 will also change to "may".

> 
> S 1.
> >      dedicated YANG module for its profile. The profile's YANG module
> >      SHOULD use YANG "import" to import the IEEE 1588-2008 YANG
> module
> >      as its foundation.  Then the profile's YANG module SHOULD use
> YANG
> >      "augment" to add any profile-specific enhancements.
> >
> >      o  A product that conforms to a profile standard can also create
> 
> Is the "can" in this statement different from the "may" in the
> previous bullet.
> 
[YJ] resolved as above.
> 
> S 7.
> >      create derivative works from this document. Those IEEE forms and
> >      mechanisms will be updated as needed for any future IETF YANG
> >      modules for IEEE 1588 (The signed forms are held by the IEEE
> >      Standards Association department of Risk Management and
> Licensing.).
> >      This will help to make the future transfer of work from IETF to
> >      IEEE occur as smoothly as possible.
> 
> I don't mean to be overly legal, but why is it that you think that the
> named authors consent is what's relevant here as opposed to the IETF,
> or everyone who has submitted text?
> 
[YJ] None of the authors are legal experts;) but during the development of this appendix, we did diligently solicit the guidance from quite a few ADs (such as Suresh), and the texts reflect exactly the legal advices we got from the IETF legal counsel for IPR matters and the IEEE Standards Association Manager of Standards Intellectual Property. Please also refer to RFC 4663 for the similar procedural texts.