Re: [tlp-interest] [Gendispatch] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-eggert-ietf-and-trust-00.txt

"Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com> Wed, 19 October 2022 14:21 UTC

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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
To: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, "gendispatch@ietf.org" <gendispatch@ietf.org>, "tlp-interest@ietf.org" <tlp-interest@ietf.org>
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I skimmed the draft and will read more carefully over the next few days.

Obviously, if it claims to represent the IETF community then it needs to be discussed/edited someplace where the community can gather :)  GENDISPATCH seems like a fine starting point.  I will encourage candidates for this year’s open trust position to read the document.

One thing that I noticed is that it gives expectations and offers advice on how to meet that expectation (e.g., present at every plenary).  That should be in the abstract as a second sentence.