[TLS] AD review of draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-02

[Kathleen Moriarty <[e-mail]>]

Hello,

Thanks for your work on the draft draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-02.

In the IANA section, I think it would be a bit more clear to say in
the last column rather than second column wince one might interpret
this listing as having 3 columns.

   The cipher suite numbers listed in the second column are numbers used
   for cipher suite interoperability testing and it's suggested that
   IANA use these values for assignment.

The registry has this reversed with the description as the second
column, which is fine.  I'm just pointing that out as it doesn't
clarify the column for you.

Nits:

Security Considerations section:

   Use of Pre-Shared Keys of limited entropy may allow an active
   attacker attempts to connect to the server and tries different keys.
s/tries/try/

   Other
   example includes the use of a PSK chosen by a human and thus may be
   exposed to dictionary attacks.
s/Other/Another/


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Best regards,
Kathleen