[TLS] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-tls-external-psk-guidance-04: (with COMMENT)

[Erik Kline via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-tls-external-psk-guidance-04: No Objection

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[S4; nit]

* s/quantum computes/quantum computers/?

[S4.2; nit]

* "including, for example, including ..." -> "including, for example, ..."

[S5.2; nit]

* "or even less number of buttons" -> "or even fewer buttons", perhaps

* "baked into or hardware or software" -> "baked into hardware or software"

[S5.3; question]

* What does "routable" mean in an identities context?  Perhaps there is
  some simpler rewording that preserves the essential meaning (or maybe
  this is well-understood and I'm just not up to speed yet).

  I could not find "rout"-stemmed words in draft-mattsson-emu-eap-tls-psk.

[S8; nit]

* s/beynond/beyond/