[TLS] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8446 (6124)

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Subject: [TLS] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8446 (6124)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8446,
"The Transport Layer Security (TLS) Protocol Version 1.3".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6124

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Ben Smyth <research@bensmyth.com>

Section: 2

Original Text
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   In the Key Exchange phase, the client sends the ClientHello                  
   (Section 4.1.2) message, which contains a random nonce                       
   (ClientHello.random); its offered protocol versions; a list of               
   symmetric cipher/HKDF hash pairs; either a set of Diffie-Hellman key         
   shares (in the "key_share" (Section 4.2.8) extension), a set of              
   pre-shared key labels (in the "pre_shared_key" (Section 4.2.11)              
   extension), or both; and potentially additional extensions.   

Corrected Text
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   In the Key Exchange phase, the client sends the ClientHello                  
   (Section 4.1.2) message, which contains a random nonce                       
   (ClientHello.random); its offered protocol versions; a list of               
   symmetric cipher/Hash algorithm pairs; either a set of Diffie-Hellman key         
   shares (in the "key_share" (Section 4.2.8) extension), a set of              
   pre-shared key labels (in the "pre_shared_key" (Section 4.2.11)              
   extension), or both; and potentially additional extensions.   

or

   In the Key Exchange phase, the client sends the ClientHello                  
   (Section 4.1.2) message, which contains a random nonce                       
   (ClientHello.random); its offered protocol versions; a list of               
   symmetric cipher/Hash algorithm (to be used with HKDF) pairs; either a set of Diffie-Hellman key         
   shares (in the "key_share" (Section 4.2.8) extension), a set of              
   pre-shared key labels (in the "pre_shared_key" (Section 4.2.11)              
   extension), or both; and potentially additional extensions.   

Notes
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RFC8446 (draft-ietf-tls-tls13-28)
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Title               : The Transport Layer Security (TLS) Protocol Version 1.3
Publication Date    : August 2018
Author(s)           : E. Rescorla
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Transport Layer Security
Area                : Security
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG