[TLS] Editorial comments on draft-ietf-tls-subcerts
"Patton,Christopher J" <cjpatton@ufl.edu> Sat, 19 May 2018 18:12 UTC
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From: "Patton,Christopher J" <cjpatton@ufl.edu>
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Subject: [TLS] Editorial comments on draft-ietf-tls-subcerts
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Hi all, I just opened a PR for the delegated credentials extension draft: https://github.com/tlswg/tls-subcerts/pull/2 Most of these changes are minor; the most significant change is the presentation of the client verification procedure. Forgive me if this question seems nit-picky: I noticed that, throughout the draft, “delegated credential” is written “Delegated credential” even if it’s not preceded by a period. Is there a reason for this? Thanks Christopher Patton
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