Re: [TOOLS-DEVELOPMENT] Final SoWs for the RFC format projects

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Mon, 08 August 2016 15:52 UTC

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Subject: Re: [TOOLS-DEVELOPMENT] Final SoWs for the RFC format projects
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I am fine with all the changes Heather suggests.

I have posted versions with all changes accepted (docx and pdf) at 
<http://www.nostrum.com/~rjsparks/rfced/>


On 8/8/16 9:44 AM, Russ Housley wrote:
> We do not have a call this week.  However, please review the documents posted by Heather.  Please raise any concerns by Monday, 15 August 2016.  These are very minor changes to documents that you were asked to review several times over the last few months.
>
> Russ
>
>
> On Aug 8, 2016, at 3:23 AM, Heather Flanagan (RFC Series Editor) <rse@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>
>> I'm on an airplane over the Pacific. Might as well use the time
>> productively!
>>
>> Pretty much all minor nits. I left track changes on, but I will be
>> surprised if anything is contentious. If we can get this blessed this
>> week, I'd like to see the RFP(s) go out as soon as possible.
>>
>> -Heather
>>
>> On 8/6/16 7:20 AM, Robert Sparks wrote:
>>> Whatever is less work for you. If you choose to work in the word
>>> files, send me the results directly please. I'm also willing to just
>>> make the corrections.
>>>
>>> RjS
>>>
>>>
>>> On 8/5/16 8:43 PM, Heather Flanagan (RFC Series Editor) wrote:
>>>> On 7/28/16 6:02 AM, Robert Sparks wrote:
>>>>> Are at http://www.nostrum.com/~rjsparks/rfced/
>>>> A few things probably important to fix:
>>>>
>>>> Publication formatter: "Detailed Description and Requirements" still has
>>>> a "draft-hoffman-xml2rfc" instead of draft-iab-xml2rfc, and a
>>>> "draft-reschke-xml2rfc" instead of RFC 7749
>>>>
>>>> idnits: " Conditions to check for any input type" still has a
>>>> "draft-flanagan-nonascii" instead of "draft-iab-rfc-nonascii"
>>>>
>>>> SVGcheck: "Overview" misspells the draft string; was
>>>> "draft-iab-sfg-rfc", shoul dbe "draft-iab-svg-rfc"
>>>>
>>>> There were various editorial nits that don't impact the meaning of the
>>>> text; do you want input on those as well? Also, would it be easier for
>>>> me to change the word doc for the above changes?
>>>>
>>>> -Heather
>>>>
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