Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Fri, 14 March 2014 07:23 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 14 Mar 2014 03:23:01 -0400
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Two suggestions:

Section 3.1, the first bullet item. I believe this is the first place
"FGL" occurs so I think it would be good to add an "[RFC-FGL]"
reference.

Section 6.1, I think Figure 6 should be updated to the latest version
from draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Fri, Mar 7, 2014 at 1:30 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> As announced at the TRILL WG meeting today, this starts a WG Last Call
> on draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-02.txt running through March 24th.
>
> Thanks,
> Donald and Jon