Re: [trill] Alvaro & Eric: draft-ietf-trill-multi-topology-06.txt candidate

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Fri, 09 March 2018 15:09 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 9 Mar 2018 10:09:33 -0500
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Subject: Re: [trill] Alvaro & Eric: draft-ietf-trill-multi-topology-06.txt candidate
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Sure, I've tweaked that in the attached. I've also expanded TRILL in the
title as the RFC Editor is likely to do that anyway...

And, just for fun :-) I've bulked up the implementation requirement words
paragraph to also reference RFC 8174.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Fri, Mar 9, 2018 at 9:22 AM, Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com> wrote:

> This seems fine. One more nit: you use "MT" before expansion in the terms
> section (alphabetical order). Can you expand?
>
> On Thu, Mar 8, 2018 at 9:54 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:
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>> Hi Alvaro and Eric,
>>
>> See attached proposed version -06 (my internal version 132) and Diff
>> against the currently posted -05. Does this resolve your comments?
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Donald
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