Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm
"Tissa Senevirathne (tsenevir)" <tsenevir@cisco.com> Fri, 14 March 2014 15:30 UTC
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From: "Tissa Senevirathne (tsenevir)" <tsenevir@cisco.com>
To: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>, "trill@ietf.org" <trill@ietf.org>
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Hi Donald Thanks for the comments will follow through and update the draft accordingly. Thanks Tissa -----Original Message----- From: trill [mailto:trill-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Donald Eastlake Sent: Friday, March 14, 2014 12:18 AM To: trill@ietf.org Subject: Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm I did a careful review of the draft and have the following suggestions: Section 3: This section correctly says that the TRILL Ethertype is really part of the link header on Ethernet links; however, that means that the length of the basic TRILL header is 6 bytes, not 8 bytes. So "8" should be changed to "6" in Figure 1 and in the text on the TRILL Header below that figure. Section 3.3 at the end, looks like a "B" and an "F" got swapped. I think OLD Capability flags "A" and "B" are defined by [rfc6326bis] and [rfcFGL]. "O" and "F" Flags are located after "F" flag in the NEW Capability flags "A" and "F" are defined by [rfc6326bis] and [rfcFGL]. "O" and "B" Flags are located after "F" flag in the Section 4.3.2: Most of 4.3 looks reasonable but the 2nd top level bullet in 4.3.2 seems to specify that OAM frames be egressed and any other TRILL Data frame addressed to the local nickname be discarded. Maybe I'm confused, but what about regular user data... Section 4.4: I think a two instances where it says "If MEP or MIP is configured on the Inner.VLAN ..." should says "If MEP or MIP is configured on the inner VLAN/FGL ..." Section 4.4: At one point it says "Non OAM l Packet". Perhaps that should just be " Non-OAM Packet" Section 8.4.2: Add one more line to the list of TLV types: TBDk Authentication TLV Minor Editorial/Typos: Section 3.2: "RFC6325" should be "[RFC6325]" although "RFC 6325" would also be OK. Section 3.3: Just before the Section 4 header, missing "is". Should say Usage of "O" and "B" bits flags is discussed above. Section 8.4.13: top of page 36, "in which case he process" -> "in which case the process" "using the Key ID space as" -> "using the same Key ID space as" Section 11.1: At end, "the Opcodes used is." -> "the Opcode used is TBD4." Section A.2: "RBrdige" -> "RBridge" Appendix B: A comment in multiple square brackets that is no longer true got left in and should be deleted. Appendix B: "shirt" -> "short" Thanks, Donald ============================= Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e3e3@gmail.com On Fri, Mar 7, 2014 at 1:30 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi, > > As announced at the TRILL WG meeting today, this starts a WG Last Call > on draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm-02.txt running through March 24th. > > Thanks, > Donald and Jon _______________________________________________ trill mailing list trill@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill
- [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Donald Eastlake
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Saravanan Arunachalam (saarunac)
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Tissa Senevirathne (tsenevir)
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Gurumukh Singh Tiwana
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Tal Mizrahi
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Xialiang (Frank)
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Donald Eastlake
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Tissa Senevirathne (tsenevir)
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Donald Eastlake
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Tissa Senevirathne (tsenevir)
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Donald Eastlake
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Sam Aldrin
- [trill] comments on this draft://RE: WG Last Call… Xialiang (Frank)
- Re: [trill] comments on this draft://RE: WG Last … Tissa Senevirathne (tsenevir)
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Tissa Senevirathne (tsenevir)
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Xialiang (Frank)
- Re: [trill] WG Last Call - draft-ietf-trill-oam-fm Tissa Senevirathne (tsenevir)