[Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases-04

[Michael Scharf via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Michael Scharf
Review result: Ready with Issues

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This informational document introduces Time-Variant Routing Use Cases. The text
is well-written and easy to read. Most of the use cases are fairly obvious. In
any case, there are no specific TSV-ART issues, i.e., problems related to
Internet transport protocols.

Yet, more in general, I don't understand why Section 6 is included in this
document. This section may easily become outdated by other documents and future
RFCs. Its content is also neither mentioned in the title nor introduced in the
abstract. The whole section 6 could just be removed without any impact on the
remaining parts of the document.