Re: [Tsv-art] [Teas] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-24

Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> Thu, 20 July 2023 13:17 UTC

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Mohammed,

Thank you. Much better.
I'll leave Adrian to decide whether there ought to be a dedicated 
subsection of §5 about multipath L4 transport protocols.
I suggested that text like you suggest would go well in such a section, 
then the piece about ATSSS could refer to it.

Reason: ATSSS is not the only service that takes this approach, or is 
likely to in future. For instance, I know of two start-up companies that 
are offering similar in-network solutions for businesses over both fixed 
and mobile.


Bob

On 20/07/2023 07:03, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
> Hi Bob, Adrian, all,
>
> Please see inline some comment on the multipath part.
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de Bob Briscoe via
>> Datatracker
>> Envoyé : mercredi 19 juillet 2023 15:14
>> À : tsv-art@ietf.org
>> Cc : draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org;
>> teas@ietf.org
>> Objet : [Teas] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-
>> rfc3272bis-24
>>
> ...
>> §5.1.1.4. (Layer-4) Transport-Based TE
>>
>> When the draft says no support for ATSSS splitting has yet been
>> developed for QUIC, it would be worth explaining why (e2e
>> cryptographic protection), and possibly referencing multipath QUIC
>> [draft-ietf-quic-multipath]. It seems rather odd to say so much
>> about QUIC (which ATSSS does not support)
> [Med] When the text was drafted (05/2021), there was no WG-adopted multipath extensions to QUIC. Since then, ATSSS supports both MPTCP and MPQUIC. TS23501 says the following:
>
> "The MPQUIC functionality enables steering, switching, and splitting of UDP traffic between the UE and UPF, in accordance with the ATSSS policy created by the network. The operation of the MPQUIC functionality is based on RFC 9298 [170] "proxying UDP in HTTP", which specifies how UDP traffic can be transferred between a client (UE) and a proxy (UPF) using the RFC 9114 [171] HTTP/3 protocol. The HTTP/3 protocol operates on top of the QUIC protocol (RFC 9000 [166], RFC 9001 [167] , RFC 9002 [168]), which supports simultaneous communication over multiple paths, as defined in draft-ietf-quic-multipath [174]."
>
>   and so little about
>> MPTCP (which ATSSS does use).
>>
>>
> [Med] I suggest to shorten the QUIC prose to be consistent with the spirit of the MPTCP text + insist on the native features supported by QUIC.
>
> I would also separate the MPDCCP text as this is not part of the ATSSS yet (although this is being proposed as a candidate for ATSSS in Rel-19)+ the applicability was restricted (?) in latest version of the spec (see "Concurrent path usage" section of that spec) + applicability to UDP traffic requires an encap which is not yet specified.
>
>
> OLD:
>     QUIC [RFC9000] is a UDP-based multiplexed and secure transport
>     protocol.  QUIC provides applications with flow-controlled streams
>     for structured communication, low-latency connection establishment,
>     and network path migration.
>
>     QUIC is a connection-oriented protocol that creates a stateful
>     interaction between a client and server.  QUIC uses a handshake
>     procedure that combines negotiation of cryptographic and transport
>     parameters.  This is a key differentiation from other transport
>     protocols.
>
>     With QUIC it is possible to support the ATSSS switching and steering
>     functions.  Indeed, QUIC supports a connection migration procedure
>     that allows peers to change their transport coordinates (IP
>     addresses, port numbers) without breaking the underlying QUIC
>     connection.  While no support for ATSSS splitting has yet been
>     developed for QUIC, extensions to Multipath Datagram Congestion
>     Control Protocol (MP-DCCP) [RFC4340] to provide support for splitting
>     data traffic of UDP and plain IP flows across multiple paths on a
>     per-packet level can be found in [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp].
>
> NEW:
>
>     Multipath QUIC [I-D.ietf-quic-multipath] and Proxying UDP in HTTP
>     [RFC9298] are used to provide the ATSSS service for UDP traffic.
>     Note that QUIC [RFC9000] natively support the switching and steering
>     functions.  Indeed, QUIC supports a connection migration procedure
>     that allows peers to change their transport coordinates (IP
>     addresses, port numbers) without breaking the underlying QUIC
>     connection.
>
>     Extensions to Datagram Congestion
>     Control Protocol (MP-DCCP) [RFC4340] to support multipath operations
>     can be found in [I-D.ietf-tsvwg-multipath-dccp].
>
>
>
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