Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-07

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Hi Martin, 

Thank you for the review.

Good point about the ranges. Updated the text as you can see at: https://github.com/boucadair/simple-ipfix-fixes/pull/10/files.

I double checked the registry and found that same issue should be fixed for other IEs: https://github.com/boucadair/simple-ipfix-fixes/pull/11/files. Please note that unlike the other entries, I'm not listing DCCP for collectorTransportPort/exporterTransportPort because of rfc7011#section-10.

Added a note for the IANA so that consistent referencing is used.

Cheers,
Med

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> This document does some housekeeping on the IPFIX Information Elements
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> The reference to the port registry is correct. It might be good for
> PortRangeStart and PortRangeEnd to clarify that the linked registry is
> not just for TCP, but also UDP, SCTP, and DCCP.
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