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Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-mtu-option-12

Olivier Bonaventure <Olivier.Bonaventure@uclouvain.be> Fri, 11 February 2022 10:20 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-mtu-option-12
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Gorry,

> A note on RFCs:
> 
> I expect you mean RFC8201 for IPv6, and particularly RFC8899 for path 
> MTU discovery, rather than RFC1191?

I mean move the historical discussion from the bottom of the document to 
the introduction so that the reader can see clearly where this comes from.


Olivier

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