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Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart telechat review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11

János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com> Thu, 07 February 2019 20:44 UTC

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To: Michael Scharf <michael.scharf@hs-esslingen.de>
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From: János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart telechat review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11
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Thank you Michael!
Janos

On 2/7/2019 9:08 PM, Michael Scharf wrote:
> Reviewer: Michael Scharf
> Review result: Ready
>
> This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
> ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
> primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
> authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF
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> This is a follow-up to my TSV-ART review of version of -08 of this document. I
> have read again version -11.
>
> The content of version -11 is a huge improvement. I'd like to thank the
> authors, the document shepherd, and the tech advisor (David Black) for
> addressing my main concerns.
>
> Michael
>

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