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Jeremy Harris <jgh@wizmail.org> Wed, 28 December 2022 22:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-19.txt
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On 28/12/2022 04:10, touch@strayalpha.com wrote:
> This incorporates all pending updates, notably the change to the DOS (datagram offset start) that was pending.
> It also addresses some of the security issues raised, though we look forward to having the security directorate provide a review based on a complete read of the document.

>>         Title           : Transport Options for UDP
>>         Author          : Joe Touch
>>   Filename        : draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-19.txt
>>   Pages           : 43
>>   Date            : 2022-12-27

Section 7 paras 1 & 2 reference RFCs 791 and 1071 respectively
as defining the OCS checksum, which seems wrong.

9.4. Fragmentation
"The default UDP reassembly SHOULD be no more than 2 minutes"
insert "timer expiration" before "SHOULD" ?
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Cheers,
   Jeremy

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