[Tsvwg] Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-tsvwg-rsvp-user-error-spec-01.txt

["Adrian Farrel" <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

Just an editorial update to this I-D as follows...

Cheers,
Adrian
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Fix boilerplate
Line lengths
Pagination and format
s/user defined/user-defined/
Normal tilde notation for undefined length fields in TLV figures
Line-break hyphenation (not allowed!)
Typos
Title case for section headings
Put references into order
Include explicit references to RFC 2205 in sections 1 and 3 where rules
   are cited.
New first sentence in section 2.
Tidy notes to RFC Editor in sections 2 and 3
s/Sub-organization/Sub Org/  for field name explanation in section 3
Clarify the text for subobjects in section 3
Clarify the text for field definitions in section 3.1
Clarify the rules in the second paragraph of section 4.1
Expand on the error processing in section 4.2


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>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Transport Area Working Group Working 
> Group of the IETF.
>
> Title : User-Defined Errors for RSVP
> Author(s) : G. Swallow, A. Farrel
> Filename : draft-ietf-tsvwg-rsvp-user-error-spec-01.txt
> Pages : 8
> Date : 2007-5-8
>
> The Resource ReserVation Protocol (RSVP) defines an ERROR_SPEC object
>   for communicating errors.  That object has a defined format that
>   permits the definition of 256 error codes.  As RSVP has been
>   developed and extended, the convention has been to be conservative in
>   defining new error codes.  Further, no provision for user-defined
>   errors exists in RSVP.
>
> This document defines a new RSVP object to permit user defined error
>   values to be communicated.
>
> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rsvp-user-error-spec-01.txt