Re: [tsvwg] WGLC comments request for draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-04.txt - to end Fri 8th Dec 2017

[Qiaobing Xie <[e-mail]>]

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> On Nov 27, 2017, at 11:05 PM, Qiaobing Xie <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> In 3.2., the new text still reads quite confusing to me.. maybe just directly says something like:
> 
> "Once an endpoint has reached the SHUTDOWN-RECEIVED state, it MUST discard/ignore subsequent ULP shutdown requests, 
> but MUST continue to response to SHUTDOWN chunks from its peer.”
> 
> And a couple of minor fixes:
> 
>   O) Receive Unacknowledged Message
> 
>      Format: RECEIVE_UNACKED(data retrieval id, buffer address, buffer
>              size [,stream id] [,stream sequence number] [,partial
>              flag] [,payload protocol-id])
> 
> -Q
> 
>> On Nov 21, 2017, at 6:47 AM, Michael Tuexen <[e-mail]> wrote:
>> 
>>> On 21. Nov 2017, at 13:27, Irene Rüngeler <[e-mail]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> I reviewed this draft and found some typos which I mentioned to Michael directly. Otherwise, I have no comments concerning functional topics and support the progression of this draft to RFC.
>> Hi Irene,
>> 
>> thanks for the review.
>> 
>> The changes  have been committed and the changes are available at:
>> https://github.com/sctplab/rfc4960bis/commit/77823a3d065c716c4257e65e65dae995ad47ee22
>> 
>> Best regards
>> Michael
>>> 
>>> Best regards
>>> 
>>> Irene
>>> 
>>>> Am 17.11.2017 um 14:52 schrieb Michael Tuexen <[e-mail]>:
>>>> 
>>>> Dear all,
>>>> 
>>>> thank you very much for agreeing to review the ID during WG LC.
>>>> 
>>>> The WGLC has just started. I'm sending this mail since I'm not sure
>>>> you are following the tsvwg mailing list.
>>>> 
>>>> Please send your comments to the mailing list. In the unlikely event that
>>>> you don't have any comments, please state that in a short mail, too.
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you very much for your support!
>>>> 
>>>> Best regards
>>>> Michael
>>>> 
>>>>> Begin forwarded message:
>>>>> 
>>>>> From: Gorry Fairhurst <[e-mail]>
>>>>> Subject: [tsvwg] WGLC comments request for draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-04.txt - to end Fri 8th Dec 2017
>>>>> Date: 17. November 2017 at 07:18:35 CET
>>>>> To: [e-mail]
>>>>> Cc: [e-mail]
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>>>>> 
>>>>> Dear TSVWG WG,
>>>>> 
>>>>> As we discussed during the TSVWG session today, the draft "RFC 4960 Errata and Issues", is thought ready for publication and now ready for feedback. The latest version of the draft is available here:
>>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc4960-errata-04
>>>>> 
>>>>> This email starts a 3 week WGLC to allow time for folks to provide feedback, to conclude on Fri 8th Dec 2017. Please send comments indicating the usefulness of the draft, noting issues, or simply asking for clariification to this list (or to the WG Dhairs).
>>>>> 
>>>>> Best Regards,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Gorry, David and Wes
>>>>> (TSVWG co-Chairs)
>>>>> 
>>>>> The following people have agreed to also submit a review during the WGLC period:
>>>>> Kacheong
>>>>> Peter Lei
>>>>> Irene Rungeler
>>>>> Qiaobing Xie
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>> 
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