Re: [tsvwg] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-21: (with COMMENT)

Bob Briscoe <in@bobbriscoe.net> Fri, 01 December 2023 00:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-21: (with COMMENT)
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Robert, Thank you for your review. See [BB]

On 28/11/2023 13:29, Robert Wilton via Datatracker wrote:
> Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-encap-guidelines-21: No Objection
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> Hi,
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> Thanks for this document, it is well written and an interesting read.
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> I have just one very minor comment for you to consider please:
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> (1) p 4, sec 1.  Introduction
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>     Therefore, the capitalized terms 'SHOULD' or 'SHOULD NOT' are often
>     used in preference to 'MUST' or 'MUST NOT', because it is difficult
>     to know the compromises that will be necessary in each protocol
>     design.  If a particular protocol design chooses not to follow a
>     'SHOULD (NOT)' given in the advice below, it MUST include a sound
>     justification.
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> I would suggest "must include a sound justification", i.e., otherwise it is
> unclear how the justification affects protocol conformance.

[BB] I don't understand. Surely it's very clear... If a protocol spec 
does not include a sound justification for why it does not follow any of 
the SHOULD (NOT)s given in this BCP, it does not comply with this BCP-to-be.

To my mind, conformance is only unclear without the 'MUST' in caps?


Bob

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> Regards,
> Rob
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