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[tsvwg] Re: [Gen-art] Re: draft-ietf-tsvwg-usr-exp-10 ietf last call Genart review

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worley@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) writes:
> - In section 4, there is much discussion of PExIDs but you have to read
>   the whole section very carefully to find out what they *are*.  I
>   suggest that the section start with a paragraph that explains that:
>
>    A PExID is a 32-bit unsigned integer encoded in network standard byte
>    order.  It is used in an experimental protocol by being prepended to
>    the protocol's transport data, in front of each separate message or
>    byte stream.  PExIDs MUST be registered in the registry created by
>    this document.

Hmmm, indeed, why not put that paragraph in the introduction, so someone
reading the introduction can learn what a PExID is, not just the idea?

Dale

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