Re: [tsvwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-06.txt

["C. M. Heard" <[e-mail]>]

Greetings,

I have read this update, and I am generally pleased with the changes, in
particular the acknowledgment that PLPMTUD may be implemented either within
the UDP transport service or by an Upper Layer protocol (or application)
that uses UDPOptions.

However, there is a readability issue in Section 3: the terms REQ and RES
are used in the initial part of that section before they are properly
introduced (currently, that happens in Section 3.1). Would it be
possible to put an introduction of REQ and RES at the beginning of Section
3?

Other than that, I am satisfied with the updated version.

Mike Heard

On Fri, Mar 3, 2023 at 12:48 PM <[e-mail]> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Transport Area Working Group WG
> of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Datagram PLPMTUD for UDP Options
>         Authors         : Godred Fairhurst
>                           Tom Jones
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-06.txt
>   Pages           : 16
>   Date            : 2023-03-03
>
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies how a UDP Options sender implements Datagram
>    Packetization Layer Path Maximum Transmission Unit Discovery
>    (DPLPMTUD) as a robust method for Path Maximum Transmission Unit
>    discovery.  This method uses the UDP Options packetization layer.  It
>    allows an application to discover the largest size of datagram that
>    can be sent across the network path.  It also provides a way to allow
>    the application to periodically verify the current maximum packet
>    size supported by a path and to update this when required.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-06
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-06
>
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org:
> :internet-drafts
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