Re: [Tsvwg] WG last call on draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctpcsum-03.txt

"Brian F. G. Bidulock" <bidulock@openss7.org> Fri, 08 March 2002 16:51 UTC

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Date: Fri, 08 Mar 2002 10:24:42 -0600
From: "Brian F. G. Bidulock" <bidulock@openss7.org>
To: Scott Bradner <sob@harvard.edu>
Cc: tsvwg@ietf.org, mankin@isi.edu
Subject: Re: [Tsvwg] WG last call on draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctpcsum-03.txt
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Scott,

Please rewrite the Introduction to adopt a professional,
formal and non-condescending tone.  The informal tone
used in the introduction may be appropriate in e-mails
between pen-pals, but sticks out as inappropriate for
an RFC.

--brian

On Fri, 08 Mar 2002, Scott Bradner wrote:

> 
> This starts a working group last call on draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctpcsum-03.txt.
> 
> The last call will end on March 24th (after the IETF meeting) 
> 
> please send any comments to the tsvwg list 
> 
> thanks
> 
> Scott & Allison
> 
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