Re: [tsvwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-11.txt

Tom Herbert <tom@herbertland.com> Fri, 31 January 2020 18:48 UTC

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Date: Fri, 31 Jan 2020 10:48:11 -0800
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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-11.txt
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One comment:

>From the draft:

"Observing the protocol sequence number pattern of network usage.
Measurements can be per endpoint or for and packet size offers one way
to meausre this (e.g., measurements an endpoint aggregate (e.g., to
assess subscriber usage). observing counters in periodic reports such
as RTCP"

Misspelling measure. Note that tracking sequence numbers in the
network, flow tracking general, typically presumes that all packets
for a flow take the same path and consistently traverse the node
tracking transport state information. There's no requirement in IP for
that to hold.

Tom

On Fri, Jan 31, 2020 at 10:35 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Transport Area Working Group WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Considerations around Transport Header Confidentiality, Network Operations, and the Evolution of Internet Transport Protocols
>         Authors         : Godred Fairhurst
>                           Colin Perkins
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-11.txt
>         Pages           : 48
>         Date            : 2020-01-31
>
> Abstract:
>    To protect user data and privacy, Internet transport protocols have
>    supported payload encryption and authentication for some time.  Such
>    encryption and authentication is now also starting to be applied to
>    the transport protocol headers.  This helps avoid transport protocol
>    ossification by middleboxes, while also protecting metadata about the
>    communication.  Current operational practice in some networks inspect
>    transport header information within the network, but this is no
>    longer possible when those transport headers are encrypted.  This
>    document discusses the possible impact when network traffic uses a
>    protocol with an encrypted transport header.  It suggests issues to
>    consider when designing new transport protocols, to account for
>    network operations, prevent network ossification, enable transport
>    evolution, and respect user privacy.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-11
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-11
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-11
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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>