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Tom Jones <tom@erg.abdn.ac.uk> Wed, 05 June 2019 14:21 UTC

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Date: Wed, 05 Jun 2019 15:20:41 +0100
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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-08.txt
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On Wed, Jun 05, 2019 at 07:13:57AM -0700, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Transport Area Working Group WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Packetization Layer Path MTU Discovery for Datagram Transports
>         Authors         : Godred Fairhurst
>                           Tom Jones
>                           Michael Tuexen
>                           Irene Ruengeler
>                           Timo Voelker
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-08.txt
> 	Pages           : 41
> 	Date            : 2019-06-05
> 

Hi TSVWG,

We have posted a new version of Datagram PLPMTUD. This version:

*  Moved to rfcxml v3+
*  Rendered diagrams to svg in html version.
*  Removed Appendix A.  Event-driven state changes.
*  Removed section on DPLPMTUD with UDP Options.
*  Shortened the dsecription of phases.

This might be the first tsvwg draft with svg diagrams (I'll hapily be
corrected), but it certainly is my first. 

The diagrams have an alternate ascii version which is compiled into the
txt version (and the html the datatracker gives me for some reason). We
have done this by using a common source file in ascii and rendering this
to svg.

- Tom

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