AD review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-source-quench

Wesley Eddy <wes@mti-systems.com> Thu, 19 January 2012 05:11 UTC

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Date: Thu, 19 Jan 2012 00:11:12 -0500
From: Wesley Eddy <wes@mti-systems.com>
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I think there are two small process-oriented changes that need to be
made to this document prior to the IETF LC.

1 - I don't think it's proper to have a normative reference to RFC
    1016.  This would be a down-ref, and need to be called out that
    way in IETF LC, but I think the right thing to do is to not have
    it as normative in the first place, since not implementing a
    congestion response to SQ doesn't require 1016 (it un-requires
    it!).

2 - I think to make 1016 historic, we need "Obsoletes: 1016" in the
    header.

Otherwise, I think this is ready to go.

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Wes Eddy
MTI Systems

AD review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-source-quench Wesley Eddy
Re: AD review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-source-quench Fernando Gont
Re: AD review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-source-quench gorry