[tsvwg] Re: Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-14: (with COMMENT)

Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> Mon, 17 February 2025 16:30 UTC

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On 17/02/2025 16:13, touch@strayalpha.com wrote:
> FWIW, regarding zero-length indicators per RFC8085, the udp-options 
> draft says:
>
>
>     Zero-length UDP packets have
>     been used as "liveness" indicators seeSection 5 of [RFC8085] <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8085#section-5>), but
>     such use is dangerous because they lack unique identifiers (the IPv6
>     base header has none, the IPv4 ID field is deprecated for such use
>     [RFC6994 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc6994>]).
>
> I would suggest that this doc should align with udp-options and try to 
> avoid such indicators.
>
> Joe
>
> —
> Dr. Joe Touch, temporal epistemologist
> www.strayalpha.com

The editor's copy for this currently says:

                 <t>At the receiver, a received probe packet that does 
not carry application data
                 does not form a part of the end-to-end
                 transport data and is not delivered to the Upper Layer 
protocol
                 (i.e., application or protocol layered above UDP). A 
zero-length payload
                 notification could still be delivered to the application,
                 see Section 5 of <xref target="RFC8085"></xref>, although
                 Section 18 of <xref 
target="I-D.ietf-tsvwg-udp-options"></xref>
                 discusses the implications when using UDP Options.</t>
             </section> <!-- End of Procedures for UDP Options: Increase -->

Do you think this ought to be updated further?

Gorry

>
>> On Feb 15, 2025, at 2:45 PM, Erik Kline via Datatracker 
>> <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>>
>> Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-14: Yes
>>
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>> COMMENT:
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>> # Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-tsvwg-udp-options-dplpmtud-14
>> CC @ekline
>>
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>> ## Comments
>>
>> ### S4.2
>>
>> * "At the receiver, a received probe packet that does not carry
>>   application data does not form a part of the end-to-end transport
>>   data and is not delivered to the Upper Layer protocol (i.e.,
>>   application or protocol layered above UDP)."
>>
>>  It is theoretically possible, however, that a UDP-Options-aware
>>  implementation could "deliver" a zero-length payload notification to
>>  the application, I presume (a la RFC 8085 S5)?
>>
>>  I suppose a similar question applies to S4.4.
>>
>> ## Nits
>>
>> ### S3
>>
>> * "less than of equal to" ->
>>  "less than or equal to"
>>
>> ### S3.1
>>
>> * "Reception of a RES Option by the sender" ->
>>  "Reception of a RES Option by the REQ sender"
>>
>>  or something, as there are two "senders" involved.
>>
>>
>>
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