Re: [tsvwg] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-13: (with COMMENT)

Mirja Kuehlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net> Tue, 28 May 2019 08:41 UTC

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Hi Vincent,

Thanks. This is also good. However, I was thinking about adding more text in section 3.6.

Mirja


> On 28. May 2019, at 08:59, Vincent Roca <vincent.roca@inria.fr> wrote:
> 
> Dear Mirja,
> 
>> Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-13: No Objection
>> 
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> 
>> Thanks for resolving the copyright issue.
>> 
>> I would prefer to see the Coding Coefficients Generation Function specified
>> normatively in text and not only as code.
> 
> Yes I agree, and it’s quite easy. Here is the new text:
> 
> NEW:
>    These two functions keep respectively the 4 or 8 less significant
>    bits of the 32-bit pseudo-random number generated by the
>    tinymt32_generate_uint32() function of [tinymt32].  This is done by
>    computing the result of a binary AND between the
>    tinymt32_generate_uint32() output and respectively the 0xF or 0xFF
>    constants, using 32-bit unsigned integer operations.  […]
> 
> Regards,
> 
>   Vincent