[Tsvwg] Re: a review for draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-dcr-03.txt
Mark Allman <mallman@icir.org> Fri, 01 April 2005 14:04 UTC
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To: Sally Floyd <floyd@icir.org>
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Subject: [Tsvwg] Re: a review for draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-dcr-03.txt
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Sally- > I have one suggestion for presentation (a SHOULD, not a MUST), and > that is that the document include an overview of the algorithm before > jumping into the details of Sections 2.1, 2.2, 2.3, and 2.4. That > suggestion, and a few nits, are in the review below. We have received a number of private comments that are similar to this suggestion for a big picture explanation. It's a good idea and we'll endeavor to add such text. We'll also address your smaller issues in our next pass. Thanks a ton for your careful read of the document! allman -- Mark Allman -- ICIR -- http://www.icir.org/mallman/
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- [Tsvwg] a review for draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-dcr-03.t… Sally Floyd
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